I love these lists. Do you?
I Googled this topic and loved these results so much that I had to share them with you. The best thing is, you can never read enough advice. I mean, who thinks, “Right I know enough. I can’t get any better at writing”?
ONE: Write in the third person unless a really distinctive first-person voice offers itself irresistibly.–Jonathan Franzen
I love this because it’s something I keep in mind for my novel. I’ve written my novel in first-person Point Of View because I have a protagonist who “isn’t reliable”. You may or may not have heard that a lot. The thing is, first-person POV has the best impact when it’s used for a specific reason, not the result of a coin toss.
So what isn’t reliable? For example, my protagonist has issues that skews the way she thinks about things and shows the reader her environment. This aspect is my advantage because it adds to the story.
TWO: Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly. Once you start spelling words in dialogue phonetically and loading the page with apostrophes, you won’t be able to stop. Notice the way Annie Proulx captures the flavour of Wyoming voices in her book of short stories Close Range.–Elmore Leonard
I’ve seen plenty of what Elmore is saying not to do in fiction. It’s easy to drop off all the “g”s and pretty up the text with telltale signs of dialect. Some people might think, “Why not?” but if you rely on this feature to show dialect, you’re producing weak fiction. If you haven’t read Kathryn Stockett’s The Help, read it. This isn’t a suggestion. Go. (And I’m plugging a previous post I did on this book if you want to read it here.)
Kathryn wrote the dialogue differences between the white and black women so well. The words and sentences as separate and singular entities mimic realistic voices. Kathryn doesn’t resort to chopping a few letters from every other word. This is why the dialogue is so powerful.
THREE: Description must work for its place. It can’t be simply ornamental. It usually works best if it has a human element; it is more effective if it comes from an implied viewpoint, rather than from the eye of God. If description is coloured by the viewpoint of the character who is doing the noticing, it becomes, in effect, part of character definition and part of the action.–Hilary Mantel
Who likes beautiful descriptions if you can’t attach a meaning to anything. Inserting something that matters to the plot, a human for example, hints to the reader that the description is necessary. The rest Hilary writes is obvious. Well-written advice.
With all editing, no matter how sensitive – and I’ve been very lucky here – I react sulkily at first, but then I settle down and get on with it, and a year later I have my book in my hand.
Did that make you feel better? It sure did for me. When I receive comments about my WIP novel that seem only to function as knives slashing apart my self-esteem and therefore tearing apart my purpose as a writer, yes, I want to screw up the paper and find a rich husband to support me so I can wallow in self-pity until the day I die. But–this is not okay after a time of deliberation (be one day or a week).
You put in the time to create the manuscript, you suffer the regret when you grow old and are still dreaming of writing “that” novel, so you need to realise that this experience will only strengthen you as a writer.
Now over to you, readers: What writing tips have you heard from famous authors that connected with you better than anything else you’ve read?
- My top 10 tips for writers (rebeccaberto.wordpress.com)